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Angel has one of my favorite background stories, after her family move at the age of six, Angel befriended a neighbor name Baxter, who was nine. Though they had a few things in common, they both have a lot of dislikes. Angel soon grew a liking towards him, but change later on. After Baxter started changing and being selfish, she move to a different school. Years later, they meet again, but now having to help each other. Angel is blinded that Baxter is evil and is fooled by his lies, which leads towards back to her old child feelings. At a young age, she was a playful, sweet little girl and would believe anything anyone tells her though, she d

Fallen is a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles 2012 Same as It Never Was Universe (SAINW) saga written and illustrated by JayJayRey. It has 75+ pages and thousands of comments with it's own club with 30+ members and 50+ watchers. The Fallen comic series includes not just canon characters but the people of deviantART's OCs according to some (and in my opinion) Next to stories and comics like TMNT Gaiden and Slumbers Torture this comic series ranks in the top three of famous SAINW work. The style of art is not only fitting for this universe but very professional, it's easy to read, look at and enjoy. Regardless it being colorless and more like sketc

The name Elizabeth is a Greek baby name. In Greek the meaning of the name Elizabeth is: From the Hebrew Elisheba, meaning either Oath of God or God is Satisfaction. Famous bearer: Old Testament Elizabeth was mother of John the Baptist and one of the earliest known bearers of this name, Queen Elizabeth II. So the name Elizabeth tends to be a very religious centered name but angelic and beautiful. Elizabeth Gordon is a humanoid lizard, which is slightly cliche. She's like other average teenage girls, quite shy around new people, but when you get to know her better, she's more social. She's a fair person, always wanting a reason why this is done

  The name Katy is a Greek and means "Pure" she is humans and get's mutated into a gecko, presumably green but the Aukland Green Gecko comes from New Zealand so how one got form New Zealand to New York is beyond me. Much like Casey Jones, Katy is untrained but has much raw natural talent.  Katy has brown and pink hair, green skin and a tail. She has a classic lizard lady look, but making her a gecko may be unique she needs some gecko like patterns on her plain green skin.  Katy is a little spitfire, but only to point of stupidity. She often acts without thinking about it, which is a nice pair up with Leo. Opposites tend to attract.  Kat

  As you are all aware if you follow my critiques names literally are everything. They are what shape an OC, they even shape us as human beings. The name Esme derived from the French Esmé (loved), the past participle of the verb Esmer (to love). Alternatively, some believe the name to be a variant of Aimé (beloved). What I'm getting at is Esme means "To Love" a beautiful name to a beautiful meaning. It's also not a common name so for that I highly applaud Kairi-EnergonKeeper for her creativity in name calling so to speak.  Esme's looks consist of black hair and turquoise eyes, though in some art it is mistaken for green. She i

  SkyCircle777's OC are four beautiful girls with a strong sister like bond that go by the names, Logan, Nora, Tesslie and Kelly. All potential love interest for the four turtles.  Logan is the potential love interest for Raphael she too is a hotheaded and stubborn. Logan's name though is a boy's name, it's from Gaelic origins that means "Hollow" so I would highly recommend changing her name to something more feminine, for example, Lonnie which his a germanic unisex name meaning "Noble".  Also I would endorse that SkyCircle777 should change up her origin a bit, it seems very Mary Sue and to much related to Raphael himself. Other then that

  As a any author your job is to grab the attention of the reader in the first sentence or two, the first line in HorrorRuby7's story, Greater Rewards, is "They hadn’t been fighting an enemy that they’d known for years. No, they fought a threat far bigger. Much more deadly. And in an insanely bitter irony, they fought alongside their enemies. In a twisted fate, the humans fought alongside them as well." It instantly grabs your attention and obviously shows we are now in a different time line then the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle world we enjoy on our television. In this apocalyptic time line a war between mutants, aliens and humans

  Xan-Seyro's world is a reboot series often times referred as "TMNT: Into the Apocalypse" This series  takes place in a future where the Kra'ang had arrived on earth, from a different dimension to mutate the human population; and the process is slowly progressing into many enemy mutants. In the series April is 15-17 in this, however her design is still in development, whenever if it's the "schoolgirl" look or a more present-day look. The Kraang, or what it's called "Kra'ang" are not robots, but are shape shifting-humanoids that were inspired by the Shoggoth of of Cthulhu Mythos.  A more darker development of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtl

  The group TMNTAprilOneil is run by FlashyFashionFraud, it has approximately 180 members with 190 watchers, this group has eleven admins, counting the founder and was founded six months ago with over 4,000 page views. It currently has thirteen folders, counting featured. The rules to the group are simple, be polite, be positive, put the right pictures in the appropriate folders and have fun. The group is dedicated to the fifth turtle, April O'Neil, from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.  The icon is the face of the group, and this icon was talentedly created. It grabs ones attention though I must say it flashes by a little to fats, personally

  In the original comic books, Michelangelo was initially depicted as fun-loving, carefree, and, while not as aggressive as Raphael, always ready to fight. He is much more serious-natured in the comic book than in the film incarnations, which have labeled his character a permanent "dude" talking pre-teen. It was Michelangelo's one-shot in this series that fleshed out most of the traits that have become synonymous with the character, such as his playfulness, empathy, and easygoing nature. In the one-shot story, Michelangelo adopts a stray cat (which he names Klunk) and also stops thieves from stealing toys meant for orphaned children. After th